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Originally Posted by some_exotic_booze
Oh the things I could tell you about north vietnam...
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and yet another pointless post. Your song sucks, it makes no sense, and instead of trying to explain what you were going for so we can ACTUALLY tell you how better to get your ideas across, you spout out useless posts like these. You want our help? then tell us what you were intending to get across, because NONE of us have any idea, because your song is just a load of random metaphors that dont even flow strung together and labeled as a song.
oh, and get over yourself.
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