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Originally Posted by Crashing Sun
This one speaks well. What sort of music is this set to? You have the melody arranged down to the last syllable, which I thought was kind of weird. The only thing I would say is I feel like you need another verse with a present day conclusion to the story.
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My band is kinda rock, kinda reggae, kinda kinda.
We're trying for our own style, thought I dont know if this is gonna make it or not. We try to make more positive messages than just complaining about the past, so ya I agree a present day conclusion would be a good idea.
I think it sounds best when the syllables match up with the bass line. Bass is kinda the base of our sound along with the drums, so the lyrics matching sounds good. The guitar flies while this is all going on, but still based around the same melody.