still trying to figure out a title
Hey I've been trying to write a bit more lately and this is what I got. I'm open (really open) to suggestions for titles so any ideas are appreciated
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So shall we let these dogs lie?
Or shoot them while they sleep?
It feels as if the mistrust
and the disgust
Is worth avoiding some bites
And some blood
Nothing, nothing seems safe
without reason to run
you left me a fear in the streets
a danger in the home
and your only companion
as you proclaim youre alone
And now those dying dogs howl
at more than the sky
nothing, nothing seems safe
without reason to die
a sweet and savage siren song
the deceitful salvage
of a long dead threat
deny your father
with brittle lies
while our fair lady
spoils your goodbyes
with her debts
ive found myself a reason to run, to die
to forget my misfortunes
dont forget to give her a kiss tonight
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ideas for titles?
crits?
its all good
Last edited by creepinson; 11-07-2015 at 05:11 PM.
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