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Old 03-21-2006, 03:59 PM   #1 (permalink)
you are freakin out, man
 
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Hey I've been trying to write a bit more lately and this is what I got. I'm open (really open) to suggestions for titles so any ideas are appreciated
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So shall we let these dogs lie?
Or shoot them while they sleep?
It feels as if the mistrust
and the disgust
Is worth avoiding some bites
And some blood

Nothing, nothing seems safe
without reason to run

you left me a fear in the streets
a danger in the home
and your only companion
as you proclaim youre alone
And now those dying dogs howl
at more than the sky

nothing, nothing seems safe
without reason to die

a sweet and savage siren song
the deceitful salvage
of a long dead threat
deny your father
with brittle lies
while our fair lady
spoils your goodbyes
with her debts

ive found myself a reason to run, to die
to forget my misfortunes
dont forget to give her a kiss tonight
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ideas for titles?
crits?
its all good

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Old 03-22-2006, 02:11 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Ok I honestly can't understand this at all. Please explain?
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Old 03-22-2006, 04:53 AM   #3 (permalink)
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sorry youre gonna have to be a bit more specific
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Old 03-22-2006, 09:01 AM   #4 (permalink)
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how about "fido plays dead for real" of course that may just be wishful thinking
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Old 03-22-2006, 12:49 PM   #5 (permalink)
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k I keep reading this and each time I can't figure out what it's about?
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Old 03-22-2006, 01:14 PM   #6 (permalink)
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its about trying to overlook your morals so that you can get to what you want, and then finally understanding that its not worth it in the end, because if something seems to good to be true, it probably is. Then theres the last little bit which is sorta about being able to accept the fact that you cant get what you want and others can
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Old 03-22-2006, 01:19 PM   #7 (permalink)
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k now I understand!
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