Music Banter - View Single Post - Ok to say: Save from a war; Burn from inside?

Ilpoxi · 11-24-2018, 08:33 AM

I'd like to have a response from the native English speakers.

I have lines:

1. How to save the nation from a war.

And:

2. African flames are burning from inside.

Is the grammar ok?

3. I have a verse:

Moving planets form a seesaw
Where the gravity has been caught
Although Jupiter has lost the force

Is the grammar ok?

11-24-2018, 08:33 AM	#1 (permalink)
Ilpoxi Groupie Join Date: Oct 2018 Location: Oulu Posts: 11	Ok to say: Save from a war; Burn from inside? I'd like to have a response from the native English speakers. I have lines: 1. How to save the nation from a war. And: 2. African flames are burning from inside. Is the grammar ok? 3. I have a verse: Moving planets form a seesaw Where the gravity has been caught Although Jupiter has lost the force Is the grammar ok?