This is the only one i've read by you, (I typically ignore peoples writings I don't reconize, or people who's stuff is typically crap) so I can't compare it to anything or say its better then your past stuff. However I think its a very solid writing, and like it quite a bit thats all I really have to add I don't see anything wrong with it. And I don't think its a bad writing at all, as said earlier people tend to ignore complex or lengthy writings because it takes longer time to crit. Good stuff all in all I like it quite a bit.
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Originally Posted by METALLICA89
Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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