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Originally Posted by hobojesus
Thanks for your help. It's been hard for me to write these songs, but I desperately want to make a good one. When I put pen to paper all my emotions seem to rush, and this is obviously the case with this one. I'll expand on it and post the finished one up again.
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it shows though. since its something you care so much about it's starting to become apparent because the language seems really well thought out, as if every word was considered. keep it up and I think you'll end up with something that really does the subject justice. It's always hardest to write about things you care so much about (which is why I've only written one or two things actually based on my real experiences) because it's a lot to live up to. so props to you for taking it on, you're doing a good job so far.
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