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Crazy Luv · 04-12-2006, 03:30 AM

like hobo said, some of the phrases dont make sense. but overall, the poem isnt bad, but it aint great either. with a few fixes, it could be on the road to succession.

04-12-2006, 03:30 AM	#3 (permalink)
Crazy Luv a l'amou fou pou tout Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: NY Posts: 355	like hobo said, some of the phrases dont make sense. but overall, the poem isnt bad, but it aint great either. with a few fixes, it could be on the road to succession.