This is a good lyric again Hobo. The theme is very good, and the chorus works well (maybe too many syllables though?). The verse could be hit or miss, depending on how it sounds when put to the melody, as the individual phrases aren't very exciting (although the 'I will never be unique/if thats the man you seek' pairing is good). It looks like it'll work very well though, so well done!
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Originally Posted by Katyppfan
When Pete plays it is 100% live , your music if that's what you call it doesn't sound so good either? so you can't really critercize can you ?
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