Okay, well....the Justin Timberlake part I did not get one bit haha, do you like him or something?
Anyway, it's very straightforward...I liked what you tried to do with using metaphors with the sky and whatnot...but it's still, in my opinion, too straight.
Straight forward...is what I meant...not straight. I'm not a heterophobe.
HA!
Anyway..just more metaphors ;] I like the general theme, though.
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