I'm not completely finished with it, It really needs work. Beware, it's only the chorus, but I wanna know if it's good to start out with...
Setting Sun
Love between two
falls like stars
from the midnight blue
I cared and shared,
but got stabbed in the back.
Letting this nightmare run it's track.
My day has come I will not fear
the light in the distance will soon be near.
you will be sorry and you will pay
for all that **** you did to me that day.
I would love some constructive criticism if at all possible. Just say what you like about it (or don't) and what needs to be removed or changed! It would help alot!