one thing i've started to mind about your lyrics/songs/poems is that they deal mostly with love and your feelings....but you're young, i'm sure you'll evolve...and i would like it to be more abstract. but again, it's rather normal that at your age you go from what you know/feel/see. this is all coming from a person that can't write to save his life so apologies in advance.
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