Okay then, thanks for the many opinions...
Armyofme I understand where you are coming from about the use of the word 'I', I'll try to cut it down.
adidasss, about me writing about my feelings and not doing to many abstract songs, well I was actually trying to cut down on the abstract songs because I went on a huge period of time where I alienated myself from my work.
Crowquill that line at the end was really about the relationship I have with the girl I'm seeing, as in you try to keep upto todays standards of dating and what have you but you also want to do things your way without the pressure of others. As adidasss said, I'm young
Murder Junkie thanks for reviewing my other lyric, even though I can't remember which one.
And Explosions in my pants, thanks.