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Old 08-16-2021, 04:35 AM   #3 (permalink)
DianneW
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Originally Posted by Neapolitan View Post
I would change that one line to:
"Partly undone
Growing out of a cocoon of my former self.
Suddenly
I browsed my bio sitting the shelf"
so you come in several shades.. neapolitan...


Ll'alleverènziai
it is only eye....

addio per ora.........
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