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Old 08-16-2021, 01:06 PM   #4 (permalink)
SnakeSpiritDude
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Originally Posted by Neapolitan View Post
I would change that one line to:
"Partly undone
Growing out of a cocoon of my former self.
Suddenly
I browsed my bio sitting the shelf"
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