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Originally Posted by SnakeSpiritDude
Alright cool thanks
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I really wanted to change as little as possible. It's your song with your words. I just thought 'cocoon > tadpole.' If it's midwest emo it's all about vocal delivery > rhyming lyrics. Like the song
Marigold & Patchwork for insinstance. His lyrics don't rhyme, but he puts a lot of emotions into them.
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Partly undone
Growing out of a cocoon of my former self.
Suddenly
I saw my bio sitting on the shelf"
^ I suck at writing, I left out a preposition
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Originally Posted by mord
Actually, I like you a lot, Nea. That's why I treat you like ****. It's the MB way.
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"it counts in our hearts" ?ºº?
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