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Old 04-30-2006, 07:32 PM   #4 (permalink)
swim
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Standing on the bridge overlooking the water,
trying to jump off my body starts to falter.
I only get one shot so how am I suppose to practice?
Well that's where you come in, stand by my side like this.

My crash test crash test dummy
It'll be okay soon don't worry
My crash test crash test dummy
It'll be okay soon don't worry

Cold wind blows right by. You stumble but I'm there.
Don't fall off just yet. One chance and none to spare.
Stand still. Stop Flinching. You're making the rope loose.
If you damage this one I don't have another noose.


My crash test crash test dummy
It'll be okay soon don't worry
My crash test crash test dummy
It'll be okay soon don't worry

Okay then this is it, I'll meet you on the other side.
Please just do this for me everything will be alright.
Your legs look too weak to jump. I'll push you if you wanna.
Now there baby dry those eyes Daddy would never harm you.


Somethings didnt flow to me. This is the way I'd rewrite it. Take and change what you want.
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