Is this a joke? I'm not trying to be rude... but this seems like some sort of contrived gimmick. If it isn't I'm sorry... but... uh... I don't know - can I get an answer? If it isn't - try and pick up a little grammar crash course somewhere... tips you=your in some cases... I don't think I want to go and point them all out. I think it's somewhat odd that you can piece together some of the more complex thoughts ... I don't know...
However, if this is a real attempt at putting your songs/poetry up here for critique... you can't just shut down someone's critique by throwing an ambiguous number at them. How do YOU know he hasn't been doing this for 7 or more years? Be careful...
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