For starters.
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The main subject isnt really dancing, but doing something unorthodox. Which most people(the crowd) where she’s at(the dance ball), are against. The subject won’t back down until (s)he makes a point, until some people open their minds to it & listen.
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At the beginning of the poem you could put some kind of mini-epilogue, saying what you've said above ^ but more poetically. Also, WHAT is the dancer complaining against?