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Originally Posted by hobojesus
No. The rhyming scheme is not how I planned it. Can I just ask why you have rewrote this?
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I am sorry, I totally misunderstood the song. I didn't know they were separate stories and I have to admit that I don't uderstand a lot of today's lyrics.
There are some boards that reem me out if I don't rhyme properly and others that don't care, so I messed up hree--
Just forget I tried. It was an exercise for me. If it worked okay and if it didn't I hoped you wouldn't be angry
GT
