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right-track · 06-03-2006, 03:50 AM

I like this for your chorus (from teen spirit) even though it's the opening verse.
Has quite a thoughtful vibe.
Just change the words?

Load up on guns and bring your friends
It's fun to lose and to pretend
She's over bored and self assured
Oh no, I know a dirty word

EDIT: To be done in the Frances first person. Love the idea of you the songwriter referring to Frances in the verse and then the chorus sung by 'Frances'...if you know what I mean.

06-03-2006, 03:50 AM	#14 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,723	I like this for your chorus (from teen spirit) even though it's the opening verse. Has quite a thoughtful vibe. Just change the words? Load up on guns and bring your friends It's fun to lose and to pretend She's over bored and self assured Oh no, I know a dirty word EDIT: To be done in the Frances first person. Love the idea of you the songwriter referring to Frances in the verse and then the chorus sung by 'Frances'...if you know what I mean.