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Originally Posted by hobojesus
Hold my hand
Tighter than that
I'm here too save your life
You can't ask why
Heaven today
Is in my way
I'm here to say goodbye
You don't know why
For what I believe
I have tears on my sleeve
I'm here too save your life
You can't ask why
I'm too much of myself
To be anybody else
Emotion flows too well
And I'm drifting into hell
Hold my hand
Tighter than that
I'm here to save your life
You can't ask why
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Bolded = what i liked
Everything else = what didnt get me to like it or dislike it, its just there
Overall, i don't know what you can do to make it better. But i don't like or dislike it, didn't pull out any emotion from me.
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Be very carful not to make a woman cry because God counts her tears. The woman came out of a man's rib. Not from his feet to be walked on. Not from his head to be superior. But from the side to be equal. Under the arm to be protected and next to the heart to be loved.
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