The length and rhythm of the phrases seems too similar between the verse and the chorus and the verse wasn't as interesting as your other songs seem to have been. But if you already had a good tune for it, then carry on working on it and maybe make the verse a bit shorter, punchier and more interesting?
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Originally Posted by Katyppfan
When Pete plays it is 100% live , your music if that's what you call it doesn't sound so good either? so you can't really critercize can you ?
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