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Originally Posted by hobojesus
Left upon the shelf
Kept quietly to myself
If they ask you where I am
'He is not home right now'
Left inside my bed
Sitting up, uncomfy
Can you change my sheets please
They've been unwashed for days
CHORUS
Cannot, cannot hear you sir
Cannot hear you whisper
Cannot, cannot hear you sir
Cannot hear you whisper
Only my thoughts
Keep me from insanity
And the food on my plate
Which I've been playing with for a week
Another day has passed
With no human contact
Locked inside a bubble
Wishing I could shout
CHORUS
Cannot, cannot hear you sir
Cannot hear you whisper
Cannot, Cannot hear you sir
Cannot hear you whisper
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Bolded = like/likeish
Underlined = what??? don't you mean upon, how can you be inside it?
IMO, you should think of a better chorus, and fix up the last two lines of the
Blue stanza