I always become very cynical about e-mails which are sent around containing poems and messages sent by so-and-so who is in one terrible situation or another... but regardless of whether the opening and closing statements are true, Adidass is right, that poem has a really great flow and the ending section:
"Life is not a race.
Do take it slower
Hear the music
Before the song is over."
Is fantastic for how it plays on the previously used theme:
"You'd better slow down.
Don't dance so fast.
Time is short.
The music won't last."
Changing it from a suggestion to an instruction. Whether or not this was written by a terminally ill girl, its really good...
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Originally Posted by Katyppfan
When Pete plays it is 100% live , your music if that's what you call it doesn't sound so good either? so you can't really critercize can you ?
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