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Old 07-07-2006, 01:01 AM   #15 (permalink)
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Yes. It is very good. (You should change all of the choruses).

I made a grammatical mistake in my suggestion, so you might want to bear it in mind. It should read:

"You and lust have made us reckless"

Not 'has', and maybe it'd make more sense as 'made me reckless'. But that's up to you, depends on what you want to say there. Either way, its already very good!
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Originally Posted by Katyppfan View Post
When Pete plays it is 100% live , your music if that's what you call it doesn't sound so good either? so you can't really critercize can you ?
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