How is it suicidal? No where did it describe killing or harming herself. But is it really so much cliche, cause i could of just said she saw her husband cheating with her best friend, went frantic, ran maniacally, ended up somewhere she didnt know, and pasted out.
Chyea, i agree with the I didnt "touch on the subject much" thin, I'll get more into it on Part two, but then again I'll still fix Part one.
edit: are you thinking the "glass" pieces are really..glass? Cause they really the broken pieces of her heart...
and the "poison" really isnt..gas or whatever poison
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