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Old 07-28-2006, 09:38 AM   #2 (permalink)
explosions-in-my-pants
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I really like all of it besides the chorus. I think you shouold keep the first 'kiss me' and then where the other's are just put something else to repeat 4x times haha..but other then that i think its really good. Good Job!
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