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explosions-in-my-pants · 07-31-2006, 07:49 PM

Umm I don't really like it. Seems like a poem/song you'd write because your bored, not because you have any real emotion to write about. Its clear the song is about making some kind of choice, but then the very last line just makes what little bit of the song that seemed any bit thoughtful, un thoughtful.

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07-31-2006, 07:49 PM	#2 (permalink)
explosions-in-my-pants angel of tragic days Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 924	Umm I don't really like it. Seems like a poem/song you'd write because your bored, not because you have any real emotion to write about. Its clear the song is about making some kind of choice, but then the very last line just makes what little bit of the song that seemed any bit thoughtful, un thoughtful. YOU CAN DO BETTER, AND HAVE!