It seems kind of weaker then your other stuff, like wording wise but the message is good, i'd like the ending it was a nice way to tie it up.
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Originally Posted by METALLICA89
Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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