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you took my world by hostage when you came into my life that day.
and now i know my heart will never be the same.
we need to get back to basics, before both our worlds collide.
and now i need a second opinion, a place to confide.
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World by hostage isn't witty its cheesy you could have saved that with some nice punch-line sort of line, but you pulled the line that followed it was really cliche.
The second half is just, yeah the same cheesy and cliche.
Quote:
(chorus)
and its amazing
how you phaze me
thinkin' about you all the time
drivin' me crazy
not being lazy
not having too much on my mind(2x)
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The rhyming here is SOOO forced phaze me? crazy lazy? Cmon.
Quote:
(verse 2)
i want to know if know if you will ever want to marry me and take off.
i wanna hitch you to the back of my trailer, take you with me to alberta.
cuz thats where i find solace, away from here(2x)
(chorus)2x)
(instrumental solo)
(bridge)
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Hitch you to the back of my trailer? OUCH, abuse isn't cool.
Quote:
and we both know that you will rise above
if you are just showered with my love
and will you ever find peace.
will you stop pushing hate.
(chorus a few times the over)
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Pushing hate?
To summarize this, it looks like something written by a 11 year old boy whos trying to rip off nsync.