nobodies a genius here, we all accept it, doesnt mean we cant just submit stuff for fun. this isnt a critique, well i didnt intend for it to be, it was just meant to be somewhere to share poetry... that was until an arrogant fool came along.
(edit) PLEASE, can we leave the aimless spamming for other aimless threads and just leave this thread for poetrrryy?
I woke in a daze
My thoughts were aghast
With the whining of wind
With the scurry of rain
Bemused, I sat stoic
My eyes fixed ahead
Yet my head went to battle
With such petulant dread.
Darkness encased me
Chills wore me down
Entrenched bouts of terror
Pummelled my core
My heart left my side
With it went pride
For all I that I was
Ran into the night.
To what this entails
One cannot divulge
To the outdoors I glared
Past the trees to the moon
And as I sat clueless
He gave me a smile
The coldest of smiles
Cementing my gloom.
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