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Old 01-10-2007, 08:04 PM   #31 (permalink)
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Ladies chill out.
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Old 01-10-2007, 08:04 PM   #32 (permalink)
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Well that was weird
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Old 01-10-2007, 08:54 PM   #33 (permalink)
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Lol. Girls, girls, you're both pretty!
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What's with people dying? Shit.
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Old 01-11-2007, 04:13 PM   #34 (permalink)
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deal with it
my poetry sucks
iadmit it
why dont you?
I could tell your poetry sucks and I haven't even read any. My poetry doesn't suck I'm just getting emotion out....That's all
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Old 01-11-2007, 06:04 PM   #35 (permalink)
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That's a nice excuse. But it grows old. Real fast. You can get your emotions out without sounding like everyone else. In fact, you'll stand out more if you're poetic abilites are better. Learn the ways of the Force, Luke.
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Old 01-11-2007, 07:12 PM   #36 (permalink)
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Old 01-11-2007, 08:53 PM   #37 (permalink)
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nobodies a genius here, we all accept it, doesnt mean we cant just submit stuff for fun. this isnt a critique, well i didnt intend for it to be, it was just meant to be somewhere to share poetry... that was until an arrogant fool came along.
(edit) PLEASE, can we leave the aimless spamming for other aimless threads and just leave this thread for poetrrryy?

I woke in a daze
My thoughts were aghast
With the whining of wind
With the scurry of rain
Bemused, I sat stoic
My eyes fixed ahead
Yet my head went to battle
With such petulant dread.

Darkness encased me
Chills wore me down
Entrenched bouts of terror
Pummelled my core
My heart left my side
With it went pride
For all I that I was
Ran into the night.

To what this entails
One cannot divulge
To the outdoors I glared
Past the trees to the moon
And as I sat clueless
He gave me a smile
The coldest of smiles
Cementing my gloom.
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Old 01-11-2007, 09:10 PM   #38 (permalink)
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Another

Rendered immobile
Flummoxed with grief
Discordant retentions of nonchalant belief
Pious ramblings
Bludgeoned till dead
A nuance of grey coats the richest of red.
Haughty delinquents
Splattered in blame
Seeds of denial cloud the towers of shame
Banal resistance
Fades once again
Once the tumult subsides all efforts are in vain.
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Old 01-12-2007, 01:32 PM   #39 (permalink)
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I actually think of myself as a good writer. Because I've been told by other writers. And after doing it for almost ten years...plus, it's all I want to be, so, I better be good, or I'm fucked.
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Old 01-12-2007, 02:06 PM   #40 (permalink)
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I am not the poetry type, but some of these are actually pretty good, even for me. Nice job people. Post some more.
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