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Old 01-31-2007, 07:43 PM   #2 (permalink)
Sneer
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Seems this is from an experience very deep to you which always gives a poem more edge. But you need to be alot more descriptive and free in your approach, i like the "hell is a place called home" but its like your holding back to me.
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