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Sneer · 01-31-2007, 07:43 PM

Seems this is from an experience very deep to you which always gives a poem more edge. But you need to be alot more descriptive and free in your approach, i like the "hell is a place called home" but its like your holding back to me.

01-31-2007, 07:43 PM	#2 (permalink)
Sneer Let it drip Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 5,397	Seems this is from an experience very deep to you which always gives a poem more edge. But you need to be alot more descriptive and free in your approach, i like the "hell is a place called home" but its like your holding back to me. __________________ LastFM Sneer's Emporium of Sound Fright Team radio show