Clarification, especially in pieces like this, is crucial. Not enough here. Your rhymes are bland. Ground/round, are you serious? Lack of good imagery, or much at all make for a boring piece. Sorry. You don't even mention NO2 here. Sorry, especially since you liked my piece, but that's how the cookie crumbles, dawg.
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Wolverinewolfweiselpigeon said:
What's with people dying? Shit.
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