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Originally Posted by TheUsedToolguy
why the heck are dogs are barking at me?
why the heck is the wind mocking me?
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heck?
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or should I let them go about their business,
but by letting them go about their business,
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seems redundant
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and if you wonder about my state of mind,
don't worry it's been this way now for some time,
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Good line
either use "heck" the whole time, or "hell" the whole time.