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Old 05-03-2007, 08:54 AM   #37 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by right-track View Post
Goodbye to the Weymouth Beach Tramp.

While intoxicated by the grog,
the vomit stained tramp,
asphyxiates on Tom’s knob.
That One Sucked Because It Wasn't Even A Haiku

Five, seven and five
Strict Haikus or sling your hook
No more free-form jive
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Originally Posted by Katyppfan View Post
When Pete plays it is 100% live , your music if that's what you call it doesn't sound so good either? so you can't really critercize can you ?
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