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Old 05-02-2007, 12:15 PM   #31 (permalink)
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Tonight the big match,
yet strangely nerveless...
Stella times six perhaps?
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Old 05-02-2007, 02:28 PM   #32 (permalink)
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Hello To The Weymouth Beach Tramp

Kick your flea-bite dog
And raise that bottle to those
Vomit crusted lips
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Old 05-02-2007, 02:33 PM   #33 (permalink)
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Right-Track is a girl
Right-Track is a big girl's blouse
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Old 05-02-2007, 03:30 PM   #34 (permalink)
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Goodbye to the Weymouth Beach Tramp.

While intoxicated by the grog,
the vomit stained tramp,
asphyxiates on Tom’s knob.
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Old 05-02-2007, 03:33 PM   #35 (permalink)
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The Myth

DRMO is straight… fo sho! *
For show, his poetry,
mocks those who know!

*denotes heavy sarcasm.
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Old 05-02-2007, 03:38 PM   #36 (permalink)
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Thomas is rubber,
And you are glue what you say,
Sticks back on to you.


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Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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Old 05-03-2007, 08:54 AM   #37 (permalink)
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That One Sucked Because It Wasn't Even A Haiku

Five, seven and five
Strict Haikus or sling your hook
No more free-form jive
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Old 05-04-2007, 10:32 AM   #38 (permalink)
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What! No free-form avant-garde Haiku jive?

Haiku in a word...
is deconstructionalism.
Dressed up like a turd!
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Old 05-04-2007, 11:57 AM   #39 (permalink)
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I don't understand.
Haiku... deconstrucionalist?
Please explain, Right Track.
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Old 05-04-2007, 12:16 PM   #40 (permalink)
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Stop being an elitist Haiku purist...cut me some slack here.
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