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Old 06-23-2007, 05:02 PM   #4 (permalink)
joyboyo53
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i dig it. like you said its a bit long. i dont really see how you could implement some of the really long lines without chopping them up somehow, but then again it is hard to make such judgement without hearing the rythm of the song. **** you have enough lyrics to make the music change completly in the middle, and then change back towads the end. i love when songs do that. somewhat of an example of that would be 'band on the run' by paul mccartney where its all soft edged and dreamy, then it kicks it up a notch in the middle, then it smooths out to a folky sound at the end.
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