I don't know if all the S's in the beginning were intentional or not, but I think its a bit much, maybe change shattered to broken? Because the battered which is the only keyword that doesn't begin with S (well and rain but thats the last word) seems to be, well like a sip of water in the desert but you want more then just one if that makes sense.
Thats the only thing I noticed about it that I had a problem with, I liked it alot.
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Originally Posted by METALLICA89
Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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