I'll crit this later, the line "Love lost yet not forgotten" needs to go, way way way way too cliche and been used frequently before.
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Originally Posted by METALLICA89
Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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