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Old 11-24-2007, 12:30 AM   #2 (permalink)
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i can see how a sense of pink floyd would fit into this.

but there are some things that you emphasize that dont need emphasis.

for example:

Have you figured it out yet
Cause All you gotta do is
Look inbetween the lines

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there are words you dont emphasise that need emphasis

Do you think you really love him?
cause all he does is hate.
Are you sure he only wants to kiss?
or get in between the sheets

its really good though.
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