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11-23-2007, 08:14 PM | #1 (permalink) |
Music Rapist
Join Date: Nov 2007
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First Shot at Lyrics...
yeah i was bored one day and was listenin to some pink floyd n' drinkin some green tea... tell me what'cha think
What has it come to? You don't know where you are. Look what its done to you Your bent all into pieces. Do you think you really love him? cause all he does is hate. Are you sure he only wants to kiss? or get in between the sheets Why do you follow Everything that is asked of you? Do you want to be accepted? If no one ever cares. Is life worth living? when your doing what your told Is this your life? or someone elses? Have you figured it out yet Cause All you gotta do is Look inbetween the lines Not completely my first shot at lyrics.. just the only one i kind of liked haha Last edited by TheCaster; 11-27-2007 at 12:52 PM. |
11-24-2007, 01:30 AM | #2 (permalink) |
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i can see how a sense of pink floyd would fit into this.
but there are some things that you emphasize that dont need emphasis. for example: Have you figured it out yet Cause All you gotta do is Look inbetween the lines -- there are words you dont emphasise that need emphasis Do you think you really love him? cause all he does is hate. Are you sure he only wants to kiss? or get in between the sheets its really good though. |
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