This is coming from the same man who'd usually rip someone a new ass for rhyming. Every last word of this piece of work, rhymes with the last word of the next line. Be consistant, even if it is in judgement. Personally, that doesn't bother me nearly as much, if it's in such a slow pace that it flows nicely. But I see no flow to it, and I'd rate this no different if even you had posted it. But if you like it, then cheers to you. Not my cup of tea.
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Originally Posted by RezZ
I think I know much better than you ever will how Mettalica is. I used to play for 2 years in a Mettalica cover band.
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