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moonage-t · 12-12-2007, 10:15 AM

hmm I wanted to keep the last line as I wanted to make it clear that calling the girl's voice had little impact even before the protagonist's voice had died.

Like, the "worked even less than it used to" line

12-12-2007, 10:15 AM	#7 (permalink)
moonage-t Groupie Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 14	hmm I wanted to keep the last line as I wanted to make it clear that calling the girl's voice had little impact even before the protagonist's voice had died. Like, the "worked even less than it used to" line