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Old 12-15-2007, 10:11 AM   #5 (permalink)
Dizzys in the wolf
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Just like.. the last line of each verse I think

Away from mine
Just to see you through
And guide you on

You need to make it clearer what you're talking about. But other than that its a pretty cool lyric. I think i would work a lot better with music too.
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