I will try to give this a more thorough review later tonight. For right now, my best advice is to completely get rid of verse 3. I see alot of things that need improvement, and alot of things that have potential once improved.
In the meantime, read the song writing tips on this site, and make some notes for future reference.
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Originally Posted by RezZ
I think I know much better than you ever will how Mettalica is. I used to play for 2 years in a Mettalica cover band.
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