If you don't want advice, then don't post on the forum. But seriously, ask anyone, it really needs work (this one atleast). Might be good to you though. But once again, if you don't want criticism, don't post it in a forum where it is meant to be criticized. Good writing.
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Originally Posted by RezZ
I think I know much better than you ever will how Mettalica is. I used to play for 2 years in a Mettalica cover band.
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