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Originally Posted by Crowquill
though I have to give her/him points for not having a bunch of bad puns in there.
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i will agree that the poem does have good uses of the words they choose. but sometimes a bad pun could be necessary if the person is just beginning and needs feedback on the bad poetry they would be writing.
but this on in particular is different because it uses signs of imagery and emotion to capture the reader.
which i like. a lot!