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backwedge · 01-05-2008, 05:03 PM

As I'm new to this forum I thought for my first post I would post a song I wrote at the end of last year ...

HE'S HAD...
V1
He's got glazed eyes and a frozen frown
A half empty glass that he cant put down
With last weeks locals on the soles of his feet
He sits there cold without a sound

Chours
He's had a hard life and nothing to show for it
Just another forgotten soul with nowhere to go
He's had a hard life that you can see
Life is been like a prison and he wants to break free

V2
A half burnt candle is his only light
A pair of folded glasses on a family album
Faded pictures just sit on the side
layered in dust of time gone by

Chours

Bridge

V3
His hand on his lap falls down to his side
A tarnished ring slips from a finger
Now's there's no more memories to say goodbye to
As he takes his last breath without a sigh

Chours X2

Life is like a prison and now he's free...

All comments good or bad are welcome....

01-05-2008, 05:03 PM	#1 (permalink)
backwedge Groupie Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: London-UK Posts: 1	He's Had As I'm new to this forum I thought for my first post I would post a song I wrote at the end of last year ... HE'S HAD... V1 He's got glazed eyes and a frozen frown A half empty glass that he cant put down With last weeks locals on the soles of his feet He sits there cold without a sound Chours He's had a hard life and nothing to show for it Just another forgotten soul with nowhere to go He's had a hard life that you can see Life is been like a prison and he wants to break free V2 A half burnt candle is his only light A pair of folded glasses on a family album Faded pictures just sit on the side layered in dust of time gone by Chours Bridge V3 His hand on his lap falls down to his side A tarnished ring slips from a finger Now's there's no more memories to say goodbye to As he takes his last breath without a sigh Chours X2 Life is like a prison and now he's free... All comments good or bad are welcome....